Sombre Victory hmmmmm?
i would like to be nice, because i am a really nice guy. i hate it when i think im being mean, but i have to be honest. now, im a musician to, and im just trying to find message for the piece. i really couldnt follow it. there was no melody. if there was, it was pretty weak. i dont know if you were even staying in the same key for most of the song. were you going for a mixture of harmonies?? im not sure, but i dont really like what i hear. keep trying, bud, you'll get there :D